viernes, 31 de agosto de 2007

The Friendship

The friendship is a shared feeling amog two or more people, where you looks for the communal property, a consolation word, a true smile or a sincere hug. During all your life you can meet many people and you have many friends, but it is neccesary to considere that there are good and bad friendship.

A good friendships is done of fantastic moments and good memories. A good friends is who is with you in difficult situation and who share your joys and victories, with who you have a lot in common, you really enjoy his company and with who you always keep in touch . For example, you have had a friend for four years, you obtained a insignia of study in France, your friend is happy, he helps to you organize all for the trip, when you are in france he calls to you every days and althought you are far, they continue being friends.

A bad frindships is not sincere, this is done of selfishness, hypocricy and jealous. A bad friend always are when he need to you but not when you need him, a bad friend no enjoy the good things that happen to you but if he enjoy the bad things that happen to you. For example, I want to travel to other country, but you with held visa, you bad friend says to all friends what happened to you, you are sad but he is happy because if he can travel and your not.

In conclusion you should well choose your friends because the friennship is important for the life of any person, and every good friends that you have give the whole love and comprehesion that they need.






1 comentario:

Luisa Vega dijo...

Well done! Luisa you have started your process.
Let's check your essay:
1. What about if you write the outline of your article. What is the general idea? What are the principal ideas?
2. Attention to:
- THE
- SPELLING MISTAKES
- EXTEND THE INTRODUCTION
- SINGULAR VS. PLURAL
- KIND OF WORD: nouns, adjectives, verbs

3. CONTENT
Are you talking about friendship? or friends?
That is why drawing the outline of your essay will help.
CLAUDIA ACERO
September 3, 2007