lunes, 1 de octubre de 2007

Lifestyle in New York ( Final version)

General idea: lifestyle in New York
Principal ideas: 1. Lifestyle is like
2. people how are
3. people how live
4. what they do
Introductory paragraph: People live in New York and their caracteristics
Supporting paragraph 1: Lifestyle is hectic, how are people and what they eat
Supporting paragraph 2: transport
Supporting paragraph 3: they live in apartament or house
Concluding paragraph: summary lifestyle in New York

New York is the biggest city of United States, it is known like the capital of the world. In this city there are people all the world like Irish, Italian, Dominican, Chinese, Korean, Puerto Rican, African and Jewish. Many people won´t live in this city beacuse it is very expensive, every person should earn 250.000 dolars in the year for that they can have comfortable life, for this reason, the majority of people live in New York are young, single and university. In the following lines I will talk about what the New Yokers lifestyle is like or of whom live in New York.

Lifestyle of New Yorkers is hectic becuse all places are far away, that is why they are in constant activity every day. They are busy all time. They almost never are in their house resting. For this reason, often the New Yorkers are seen as holders of an attitude of superiority by a little time that to be able to dedicate to nobody more. Besides, they have an unhealthy lifestyle because they do not have the oportunity of healthy eat. In New York there are many restaurants but the mayority of restaurants are junk food because New Yorkers do not have time.

In New York like all places are far away, the New Yorkers prefer public transport because the high tariffs of parking, and the congestion of the traffic, they normally use underground of New York beacuse they think it is fast and efficient, although other people like walk, or take a taxi and a bus. It is a polluted city.

The 90% of the news yorkers live in comfortable, modern and spacious apartments. These aparatements are in building with an architecture significant and with a great variety of styles. The mayority building are surrounded by resturants, museums, theatres and shops. The New Yorkers in their free time make sport, go to art gallery and museums. They like very much art and historical pleaces.

New York is a expensive city, has different transports, is noisy and picturesque, people are very busy then they are not pay attetion to you, they don´t worry life of the other people. I think that it is a excellent city to live single. This city is bigger than Boston, you will can to have variety oportunity of work and know people. In New York is easy to live.

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CAPITALIZATION: New York
ARTICLE: The
LIVE vs. LIFE
FOR THAT REASON: connector to express purpose, reason, result (TOTAL ENGLISH PREINTERMEDIATE p 73)
listing things: they have to be of the same category adj, adj, adj
INDIRECT DIRECT QUESTION:
Where is N.Y? // Do you know where NY is?
What is the New Yorkers lifestyle like? //I will talk about what the the New Yorkers lifestyle is like.

SUBJECT QUESTION: Who/What Verb (in singular)

ADVEBS OF FREQUENCY: tobe # verbs

People who live
CLAUDIA ACERO